CaitE Baloney

Everything has basically been said but I would just like to say that I like this and will be whisked away onto the other chapters as soon as I have ...

Hey, I would just like to say that I really enjoyed reading that. Like everyone else said it was something different. Keep up the awesome work Cait :D

Hey, I thought this was a pretty good chapter, though I wish there was more to it. However I know it takes a lot of time to write a story ...

Well most of the critique has already been done but I just want to add that I really enjoyed reading this. I liked that you described everything in detail however ...

Hi, Okay I liked that. It was pretty good. The only big this that I have to say is that maybe you should mention her name before he says it. ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem. I really like your idea's that you put into this and it truely captures a good image. The only thing that I would have ...

That was pretty good I did notice a few other things in there that I think that you could fix. The doctors at the doctor’s office were never surprised to ...

Wow that was really great. I haven't really been on this site all that often lately so I haven't read anything in a while from here. Now more about you ...

This was a really good start, or middle, I really don't know what part of the story this is but it all has a ton of action in it so ...

Hey, this was fairly good for a first post here. Since others have gone over the grammar I would like to add that the end is a bit abrupt. I ...

Wow, that was really great. I haven't read much about gypsies so it is nice to see something new. I think that you could use a few more details. You ...

I think that you did a great job at editing this, however something that would improve it greatly would be to break up the middle a little bit right now ...

I think that this was fairly well written and with a bit more editing could become a very good story. I think that you should take a look at the ...

I would first like to say that I thought your story was quite lovely. It is nice to read a quick short story every once in a while that is ...